Tuesday 25 August 2015

Angle cat 😇

 It was a bright sun shinned day, with heat I've never felt before. Suddenly a fireman arrived at a small house, and walked in.It's thick with smock and he culdent see far I front of him. he saw the kitten. It looked lifeless. 


He picked up the cat gently so it had support ,and rushed it out side out side with the cat. He places it straight on the ground. 


He delicately puts a breathing mask on the cat and gives it some water and suddenly the cat woke up. Everybody cheered and clapped.


Tuesday 11 August 2015


Straight after Max drank from it, he kicked a ball across the new playground.

Polite - I am a polite young teenager  because I'm friendly to people and treat people with respect. I'm polite because my parents taught me to use my manners by saying yes, please and thank you. If i worked for you i would listen to you when you speaking and open the for you.

Sociable- I'm sociable because I love going on adventures with my friends, and love trying new sports.
Happy- I am happy because I'm not bothered what I do, and always bubbley and smiley

Kind - I am kind because I let others go first, and I don't just think about my self.
Organised- I am organised because I always get my  uniform ready for school, and always ready for 


My goal is to use a range punctuation (,!') correctly 

My goal is to make my sentence more interesting by adding more detail.

Sunday 10 May 2015





Caption taniwha what happens next

Caption taniwha has crashed into the warter because he was covered in space snot. Then suddenly he saw a big mako shark. Caption taniwha had no way of escapeing. So the shark ate the space ship but doesn't eat caption taniwha. Caption taniwha is in the Sharks stomach he try's to escape over and over again. Then he had an idea.  His idea was to tickle his insides over and over again. Then the shark started to cough and cough then he came zooming out of the sharks mouth. Then the shark came up to him and said why r u running away from me I'm a lovely shark. I am having a tea party if you would like to come. Then captain taniwha said I love tea party's I would love to come
The end

Wednesday 6 May 2015

Sunday 15 March 2015




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